Release the shadows of sloven despair;
enter the triage of precious gates bequeathing to vintage love…
Embrace the essence of eternality’s sweet journey;
let the rapture of forgiveness enter the gates of your soul…
Hold the hands of love’s abiding treasures
adorning evermore into the flourishing truth of love’s everlasting profusion…
(Written: September 1st, 2008 8:10 a/m)
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
Copyright© 2008 Poetess Victoria L. McColley
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain||11/17/2008|
|Vickie,Fantastic photo . . . Vous écrivez divinement – votre travail est absolument magnifique!!Les étreintes et l’amour,Lance|
|Reviewed by Destiny Diadem||10/22/2008|
|Marvelous personification. Your writing is heavenly.“Hold the hands of love’s treasure,”|
|Reviewed by 000 000||10/13/2008|
|My gate key is lost.
Wonderful writing and photo.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray||9/6/2008|
|Would that all “love” experiences were so, Vickie. Lovely thoughts. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes,Regis|
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh||9/6/2008|
|What a great photo accompanied by a great poem!!!|
|Reviewed by Robby Baby Poet of Amour||9/4/2008|
|OOOOO…Where did you get that insanely cool pic?! Another of those short stanzas full of meaning. I think you are doing the voodoo trances. I was thinking about letting go, and someone I should forgive even though I can’t. Our muses must be spying on each other. Hope yours isn’t a peeping tom! LOL|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy||9/2/2008|
|A wonderfully positive poem. Beautiful!
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle||9/2/2008|
|To quote the McDonalds commercial”I’m Loving It” .That picture blew me away and it made my heart stop.Wow,you always put the most fascinating pictures to go along with your poems which makes your poetry “a must read” everytime.Take good care of yourselfEdwin|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G||9/2/2008|
|WOW! This a shining TREASURE Vic!
I will savor this forever!
The picture is stunning! and I feel such a spiritual uplift from the pict. and your well written verse, steeped in passion!
How do you find your pict.s on Deviant, I can never find this specific kinds, I think “they” gravitate to you honey… A BLESSING! Enjoy! Your day in inspirational awe!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful SHEExoooStay Positive!
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone||9/1/2008|
|I love this photo! This poem is filled with such passion, I believe you have out done yourself here, Vickie..
these lines just blew me away:Embrace the essence of sweet journey;let the rapture of forgiveness enter the gates of your soul…Yes forgiveness must come from the soul level, otherwise it isn’t forgiveness at all…
Much peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry||9/1/2008|
|As always your heady images of romance and passion dominate the page as you offer us the voice of the Poetess of Passion.
|Reviewed by Linda Law||9/1/2008|
|Passionate piece.. well written… gorgeous photo too.
|Reviewed by Jon Willey||9/1/2008|
|love aroused and revisited — love beautiful, simple and passionate — this is a real treasure Vickie — share life’s joys this day — JMW|
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards||9/1/2008|
|A lovely poem of love’s awakening. Very nicely done!Dee|
|Reviewed by Poetess Of The Heart La Belle Rouge||9/1/2008|
|A tender look at love.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva||9/1/2008|
|Very beautiful, I love it!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
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